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指南者留學(xué) 徐萍(Fiona)
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<p>在競(jìng)爭(zhēng)愈加激烈的留學(xué)申請(qǐng)市場(chǎng)中,每位申請(qǐng)人都渴望獲得夢(mèng)校的錄取通知書。然而,現(xiàn)實(shí)情況往往充滿挑戰(zhàn),尤其是當(dāng)你的本科院校還不在夢(mèng)校認(rèn)可的清單里時(shí),X同學(xué)恰好就是這樣的申請(qǐng)大軍中的一員。面對(duì)這種困境,X同學(xué)并沒有退縮,而是決定通過精心打磨的申請(qǐng)文書來彌補(bǔ)其他潛在短板,展現(xiàn)出她的全面競(jìng)爭(zhēng)力。在這篇文章中,我們將詳細(xì)介紹X同學(xué)如何利用簡(jiǎn)歷、個(gè)人陳述等申請(qǐng)材料,充分地展示自己的學(xué)術(shù)背景和實(shí)踐能力,最終成功獲得倫敦政治經(jīng)濟(jì)學(xué)院(LSE)法學(xué)碩士(LLM)項(xiàng)目的offer。</p>
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<h1><span style="color: #ffffff;"><strong>打磨簡(jiǎn)歷:</strong></span></h1>
<p><br />X同學(xué)本人的綜合能力出眾,她有著近90分的高GPA和3個(gè)校級(jí)獎(jiǎng)學(xué)金,同時(shí)通過5段實(shí)習(xí)經(jīng)歷積累了豐富的法律實(shí)踐能力。在處理她的英文CV時(shí),我們對(duì)經(jīng)歷描述進(jìn)行了優(yōu)化,刪減了一些不夠突出專業(yè)能力的細(xì)節(jié),突出了她在實(shí)習(xí)中承擔(dān)的關(guān)鍵任務(wù)和達(dá)成的成效。此外,我們還對(duì)CV的格式進(jìn)行了調(diào)整,采用了清晰、合適的布局,確保重要信息一目了然。在用詞選擇上,我們也精心挑選了行業(yè)相關(guān)且能準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)她能力和經(jīng)驗(yàn)的專業(yè)術(shù)語,使整個(gè)簡(jiǎn)歷既具備專業(yè)性又易于理解。</p>
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<h1><span style="color: #ffffff;"><strong>通過反復(fù)的語音和文字溝通打磨個(gè)人陳述:</strong></span></h1>
<p><br />LSE-LLM這個(gè)項(xiàng)目要求申請(qǐng)者有非常優(yōu)秀的法學(xué)學(xué)士學(xué)位或同等學(xué)歷,例如,英國法學(xué)學(xué)士一等或優(yōu)異的二等一學(xué)位或同等學(xué)歷,X同學(xué)的本科院校其實(shí)并不在LSE的認(rèn)可清單里。為了充分體現(xiàn)她的申請(qǐng)競(jìng)爭(zhēng)力,除了打磨簡(jiǎn)歷以外,我們同時(shí)也針對(duì)PS進(jìn)行了反復(fù)的語音和文字溝通,以期能通過文書彌補(bǔ)她本科背景的小小不足。最終,在LSE-LLM這個(gè)項(xiàng)目的PS中,我們以她父親公司破產(chǎn)的案例作為切入點(diǎn),結(jié)合她本科的學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)歷表達(dá)了她對(duì)于公司破產(chǎn)法和海外IPO融資的濃厚興趣,由此引出她想要成為一名相關(guān)領(lǐng)域的國際律師的職業(yè)理想。接下來的段落中,我們著重描寫了她在本科的課程學(xué)習(xí)中發(fā)現(xiàn)的相關(guān)課程的局限性(引出為什么想要攻讀該項(xiàng)目),科研經(jīng)歷中不斷深入思考和優(yōu)秀的科研能力、在實(shí)習(xí)經(jīng)歷中于公司破產(chǎn)法方面的所做所思所想,最后通過對(duì)該項(xiàng)目的課程設(shè)置和授課模式的描寫凸顯攻讀該項(xiàng)目對(duì)于她實(shí)現(xiàn)職業(yè)理想的幫助。</p>
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<h1><span style="color: #ffffff;"><strong>缺乏相關(guān)經(jīng)歷,如何構(gòu)思文書?</strong></span></h1>
<p><br />香港大學(xué)技術(shù)與知識(shí)產(chǎn)權(quán)法法學(xué)碩士項(xiàng)目旨在提供涵蓋技術(shù)法、知識(shí)產(chǎn)權(quán)法以及兩者之間交叉領(lǐng)域的各個(gè)方面的一系列課程,包括人工智能、大數(shù)據(jù)、數(shù)據(jù)挖掘、互聯(lián)網(wǎng)平臺(tái)監(jiān)管、3D打印、外層空間技術(shù)、納米技術(shù)、金融技術(shù)、計(jì)算機(jī)程序和算法保護(hù)、數(shù)字混合和用戶生成內(nèi)容、在線流媒體、綠色技術(shù)、生物技術(shù)等。針對(duì)X同學(xué)知產(chǎn)方向的PS,鑒于她缺乏相關(guān)的實(shí)踐經(jīng)歷,我們換了一個(gè)寫作思路。開頭部分,我們描述了她在幫助外公的處方申請(qǐng)專利的過程中,深入思考了傳統(tǒng)中醫(yī)藥處方的知識(shí)產(chǎn)權(quán)保護(hù)制度,這段經(jīng)歷激發(fā)了她想要在知產(chǎn)這個(gè)領(lǐng)域深入研究的愿望,受此愿望驅(qū)使,她又結(jié)合自己在《知識(shí)產(chǎn)權(quán)法學(xué)》課程上學(xué)習(xí)到的知識(shí),攥寫了一篇論文介紹傳統(tǒng)中醫(yī)藥處方的發(fā)展現(xiàn)狀和其特點(diǎn),現(xiàn)行的知產(chǎn)產(chǎn)權(quán)的范疇和特點(diǎn),以及適用知識(shí)產(chǎn)權(quán)制度保護(hù)中醫(yī)藥處方的必要性以及可行性。這些經(jīng)歷使得她想要成為一名知產(chǎn)領(lǐng)域的律師去保護(hù)傳統(tǒng)中醫(yī)藥企業(yè)的知識(shí)產(chǎn)權(quán)的愿望變得順理成章,接下來在實(shí)習(xí)經(jīng)歷部分,我們重點(diǎn)描寫了她為了實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的職業(yè)理想,是如何在實(shí)習(xí)過程中鍛煉自己的實(shí)踐能力以及在課程學(xué)習(xí)中提升自己的理論基礎(chǔ)的,最后闡明擇校原因的段落也緊扣她想要保護(hù)傳統(tǒng)中醫(yī)藥企業(yè)的知識(shí)產(chǎn)權(quán)的愿望來寫。</p>
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<p><br />在整個(gè)文書定稿的過程中,我通過語音溝通、微信文字溝通和指南者線上化系統(tǒng)的批注功能和X同學(xué)進(jìn)行了反復(fù)的交流,在這個(gè)過程中我們通過不斷的思想碰撞共同打磨出一份既能體現(xiàn)其專業(yè)能力,又有一條完整的故事線的文書。最終,我們終于等來了她夢(mèng)寐已久的dream offer!</p>
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<h1><span style="color: #ffffff;"><strong>寫在最后:</strong></span></h1>
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<p>每一位申請(qǐng)者在追求夢(mèng)想的路上都會(huì)面臨挑戰(zhàn)和困難,但只要保持信念、不忘初心,在路途的每一個(gè)轉(zhuǎn)折點(diǎn)都可以找到前行的動(dòng)力。即使面對(duì)困難和挑戰(zhàn),只要保持勇氣和決心,通過精心準(zhǔn)備和持續(xù)努力,夢(mèng)想依然可以成為現(xiàn)實(shí)。X同學(xué)以自己的行動(dòng)證明,即使初始條件不盡理想,也可以通過不懈努力和精心打磨的文書展現(xiàn)出個(gè)人的全面競(jìng)爭(zhēng)力。愿你在留學(xué)申請(qǐng)的旅途中不斷展現(xiàn)出自己的堅(jiān)韌和才華,終能實(shí)現(xiàn)心中的目標(biāo)和理想。前路漫漫,讓我們懷著信心與勇氣,共同迎接更多光輝的時(shí)刻!</p>
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