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<div class="value" contenteditable="false"><span style="color: #262626; font-family: 'Helvetica Neue'; font-size: 16px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; white-space: normal; background-color: #ffffff; text-decoration-thickness: initial; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; display: inline !important; float: none;">薩格勒布大學(xué)交換;課程實(shí)驗(yàn):草魚魚片的微凍保鮮及其鮮度變化;課程實(shí)驗(yàn):魚類基因組DNA的提取、擴(kuò)增、重組與轉(zhuǎn)化;湖北省武漢市野芷湖漁業(yè)資源與環(huán)境調(diào)查報(bào)告;課程實(shí)驗(yàn):蛋白酶產(chǎn)生菌的分離、鑒定、選育與培養(yǎng);大學(xué)生創(chuàng)新創(chuàng)業(yè)訓(xùn)練計(jì)劃項(xiàng)目(省級(jí))pdzk1ip1基因調(diào)控斑馬魚雄性性別決定和分化的研究;畢業(yè)設(shè)計(jì):蛋氨酸硒對(duì)黃顙魚肌肉脂肪代謝相關(guān)酶的影響</span></div>
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<h1><span style="color: #ffffff;"><strong>提綱準(zhǔn)備</strong></span></h1>
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<p><span style="color: #262626;">我與W同學(xué)的接觸始于23年7月底。初次溝通后,我驚訝于W同學(xué)豐富的學(xué)術(shù)經(jīng)歷。<strong>盡管他申請(qǐng)項(xiàng)目多樣化,涵蓋生物技術(shù)、生物多樣性、食品安全和食品科學(xué)四個(gè)方向,但他的經(jīng)歷與這些方向都很契合</strong>。</span></p>
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<p><span style="color: #262626;">因此,我首先對(duì)W同學(xué)的經(jīng)歷進(jìn)行了篩選和分類,并指導(dǎo)他填寫相應(yīng)素材,梳理了文書寫作思路。</span></p>
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<p style="color: #666666; font-style: italic; text-align: center; font-size: 14px;"><span style="color: #262626;"><em>整理文書思路</em></span></p>
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<p><span style="color: #262626;">進(jìn)入文書寫作階段,鑒于W同學(xué)豐富的經(jīng)歷,撰寫一篇能夠體現(xiàn)W同學(xué)專業(yè)能力的文書并不難。<strong>然而,我關(guān)注的重點(diǎn)是如何讓文書更貼合申請(qǐng)項(xiàng)目,同時(shí)避免堆砌經(jīng)歷,使文章脈絡(luò)更清晰、更具可讀性</strong>。</span></p>
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<p><span style="color: #262626;">以下,便是我對(duì)倫敦大學(xué)學(xué)院生物化學(xué)工程理學(xué)碩士的寫作思路。</span></p>
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<h1><span style="color: #ffffff;"><strong>項(xiàng)目解讀</strong></span></h1>
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<p><span style="color: #262626;">倫敦大學(xué)學(xué)院生物化學(xué)工程理學(xué)碩士項(xiàng)目由化學(xué)工程師協(xié)會(huì)(IChemE)認(rèn)證,專注于將生命科學(xué)的進(jìn)步轉(zhuǎn)化為實(shí)際過程或產(chǎn)品的核心生物化學(xué)工程原理。該項(xiàng)目在就業(yè)市場(chǎng)上有很大的潛力和廣泛的發(fā)展前景。</span></p>
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<p><span style="color: #262626;"><strong>除了要求申請(qǐng)者具備生物化學(xué)、分子生物學(xué)和化學(xué)工程等理論基礎(chǔ),該項(xiàng)目尤其注重申請(qǐng)者的實(shí)驗(yàn)室技能和應(yīng)用能力。</strong></span></p>
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<p style="color: #666666; font-style: italic; text-align: center; font-size: 14px;"><span style="color: #262626;"><em>該項(xiàng)目對(duì)申請(qǐng)者個(gè)人陳述的要求</em></span></p>
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<p><span style="color: #262626;">基于項(xiàng)目解讀和個(gè)人陳述要求,我構(gòu)思了W同學(xué)的文書框架,以時(shí)間為線索,展示W(wǎng)同學(xué)對(duì)生物化學(xué)工程的逐漸深入理解。文書以對(duì)3D生物打印和細(xì)胞培養(yǎng)技術(shù)的關(guān)注作為引子,引出了W同學(xué)對(duì)生化工程領(lǐng)域的興趣。</span></p>
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<p><span style="color: #262626;">然而,僅舉這樣的例子是不夠吸引人的,<strong>因此我特別強(qiáng)調(diào)了W同學(xué)為進(jìn)一步了解相關(guān)創(chuàng)新應(yīng)用所閱讀的前沿文獻(xiàn),并特別提到了他研讀UCL一位教授的研究論文,展示了他對(duì)行業(yè)發(fā)展的關(guān)注和個(gè)人思考</strong>。</span></p>
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<p><span style="color: #262626;">在接下來的核心部分,我選擇了W同學(xué)的大創(chuàng)項(xiàng)目《pdzk1ip1基因調(diào)控斑馬魚雄性性別決定和分化的研究》以及關(guān)于蛋白酶產(chǎn)生菌的分離、鑒定、選育與培養(yǎng)的課程實(shí)驗(yàn)來展示他的科研能力。</span></p>
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<p><span style="color: #262626;"><strong>這兩個(gè)項(xiàng)目側(cè)重點(diǎn)不同,前者通過對(duì)具體實(shí)驗(yàn)步驟的詳細(xì)闡述展示了W同學(xué)在分子生物學(xué)和基因編輯領(lǐng)域的專業(yè)技能,同時(shí)強(qiáng)調(diào)了他對(duì)實(shí)驗(yàn)細(xì)節(jié)的嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)關(guān)注和對(duì)實(shí)驗(yàn)失敗風(fēng)險(xiǎn)的認(rèn)識(shí),以展現(xiàn)他的科學(xué)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)性</strong>。</span></p>
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<p><span style="color: #262626;">對(duì)于后者,我將重點(diǎn)放在W同學(xué)作為團(tuán)隊(duì)領(lǐng)導(dǎo)者在實(shí)驗(yàn)過程中展示的<strong>問題解決能力和團(tuán)隊(duì)合作能力</strong>。此外,我還補(bǔ)充了W同學(xué)的實(shí)習(xí)經(jīng)歷,以證明他的<strong>理論應(yīng)用能力和創(chuàng)新能力</strong>。這些技能在現(xiàn)代生物化學(xué)工程領(lǐng)域非常重要。</span></p>
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<p><span style="color: #262626;">除此之外,在文章的后半部分,我并沒有將W同學(xué)的職業(yè)規(guī)劃放在最后一個(gè)部分,而是與前文的經(jīng)歷相呼應(yīng),與擇校原因交織在一起進(jìn)行闡述,使整個(gè)文書的邏輯自洽且連接緊密。脫離職業(yè)規(guī)劃,過往經(jīng)歷即使與申請(qǐng)專業(yè)再匹配,對(duì)招生官來說也是虛無縹緲的。<strong>同樣,職業(yè)規(guī)劃也并非一蹴而就,它是個(gè)人在成長(zhǎng)過程中不斷探索的結(jié)果。這樣的處理也能從側(cè)面反映W同學(xué)對(duì)生物化學(xué)工程領(lǐng)域的不斷深化理解</strong>。</span></p>
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<p><span style="color: #262626;">值得一提的是,在整個(gè)文書寫作過程中,我與W同學(xué)始終保持著密切的溝通。無論是框架結(jié)構(gòu)還是用詞,W同學(xué)都能及時(shí)與我探討他的想法。正是有了這種密切合作,最終的文書成稿才能在展現(xiàn)專業(yè)度的同時(shí)更具個(gè)性化。</span></p>
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<p><span style="color: #262626;">W同學(xué)的所有申請(qǐng)項(xiàng)目最終在十二月初全部完成并提交,并在12月底收到了<strong>倫敦大學(xué)學(xué)院生物化學(xué)工程理學(xué)碩士的offer</strong>。我由衷為他感到高興!</span></p>
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